Siren Queen
by nghi vo
tor
2022
Query Letter
I am seeking representation for my novel, Siren Queen. I believe this book may interest you due to your past work in fantasy, especially fantasy that deals with identity, history and the intersection of the two.
Siren Queen is set in a somewhat familiar 1930s Los Angeles. Luli Wei, a Chinese-American aspiring actress, risks everything to become an immortal star in a Hollywood run on Fairyland rules. She has allies in the form of a king of the silver screen and a captive Scandinavian monster, but ranged against her are vengeful directors, stories that never included someone like her, and her own dangerous ambitions.
I've been published at Strange Horizons, Uncanny Magazine, and Lightspeed Magazine, and I am on the 2014 James Tiptree Honor List.
Per your request, I have added the first five pages of my manuscript below.
Thank you so much for your time!
About
Age Range
Adult
Genre
Fantasy (Historical)
Word Count
80,000
Book Link
https://us.macmillan.com/books/9781250788856/sirenqueen
Agent
Diana Fox
Query Stats
Number of Queries Sent
~8
Number of Full Requests Received
4
Number of Offers of Representation
2
Number of Months Spent Querying This Novel
5 months
Years Spent Writing Before Getting an Offer
11
Number of Manuscripts Queried Before This One
0
Publication Status of The Book Queried
Published (Big 5)
Note to querying writers:
My agent told me my query letter was distinctly mediocre, but I got her attention based on the pages I submitted with it.